Travel on Italy!

I think, my oral presentation is good.
My powerpoint have a images , could be attractive because the photos are from italy and people already know them. During 4 minutes 30 seconds aproximately.
I not looking at audience most of the time becouse sometimes look at the powerpoint or paper. I moving my hands and pointing to the powerpoint.
I organize at ideas according to trip. My information is detailed and clear becouse everyone knows.
The grammar I think is good even if they are I'm not a professional. Sometimes would not come expressions in english but I tried to search for other quickly.
In general was well, but in the next presentation will better.

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Dear Lourdes,

I found your name on the facebook Exchange web site, and I'm just writing to introduce myself. My name is Nerea López Fernández and I’m 16 years old. I live in Sant Miquel de Fluvià (Girona). I’m into music, romantic films…

What about you? What music do you like there is a local festival? I don’t really like it. Have you heard of it? It is very popular for the train.

At school I’m studying English, French, Spanish and Catalan, I like to do languages at university. School's not OK at the moment because we have big exams this year. Next year will be harder so I'm not looking forward to it.

Anyway, it would be great to hear from you. Why not send me a message? Or maybe we could chat on-line. Write soon.

Nerea